The end. Sad what happened to Aya's family. It explains how she's so different in the Breeder's Life story, but was so alive here. What she saw broke her on the inside, and she became a kimemaru.
Added to the pool. Thanks for uploading the rest. It almost seems like being a perpetual feeder for ko-predators is too good of a fate for that Marisa.
Added to the pool. Thanks for uploading the rest. It almost seems like being a perpetual feeder for ko-predators is too good of a fate for that Marisa.
No, death is too good. Too quick. Too easy. Boom, and it's over.
No, death is too good. Too quick. Too easy. Boom, and it's over.
A life of perpetual suffering? That's far worse.
Far worse, that Marisa got what's coming for him, it was his own choose to kill Aya's family, this is a good thing because Marisa is going to die anyways that dipshit, but you do make a fine answer.
Done and done, just a couple fixing left. I'll do that later.
Very enjoyable Aya's backstory. I quite like the idea of neo yukkuri, not many story touches on that level of god complex I think?
And apparently calling Aya 'boss' was something Alice thought of, though initially turned down by Aya. Well, not that Aya remembers who Alice is anymore, just that he has a duty to the forest.
So that's all five of the characters's stories (Mister, Aya, Chen, Momiji, and Dosu). I guess this is the conclusion of this series.
Done and done, just a couple fixing left. I'll do that later.
Very enjoyable Aya's backstory. I quite like the idea of neo yukkuri, not many story touches on that level of god complex I think?
And apparently calling Aya 'boss' was something Alice thought of, though initially turned down by Aya. Well, not that Aya remembers who Alice is anymore, just that he has a duty to the forest.
So that's all five of the characters's stories (Mister, Aya, Chen, Momiji, and Dosu). I guess this is the conclusion of this series.
Thank you very much There are a few missing textboxes here and there, but aside for that, you did a great job Though I find strange your usage of "he"/"him" when referring to yukkuri They're always referred to as female, mostly because they are based on Touhou, where there are like 3 males in the whole series, and they also talk using a female speech pattern
The neo yukkuri business is not different from generic shithead yukkuri expecting the world to bow down to them, just worded differently Though I didn't expect that Marisa to be so bad to the point of eating other yukkuri because "Marisa is the chosen one"
Done and done, just a couple fixing left. I'll do that later.
Very enjoyable Aya's backstory. I quite like the idea of neo yukkuri, not many story touches on that level of god complex I think?
And apparently calling Aya 'boss' was something Alice thought of, though initially turned down by Aya. Well, not that Aya remembers who Alice is anymore, just that he has a duty to the forest.
So that's all five of the characters's stories (Mister, Aya, Chen, Momiji, and Dosu). I guess this is the conclusion of this series.
Thank you very much There are a few missing textboxes here and there, but aside for that, you did a great job
The neo yukkuri business is not different from generic shithead yukkuri expecting the world to bow down to them, just worded differently Though I didn't expect that Marisa to be so bad to the point of eating other yukkuri because "Marisa is the chosen one"
Yeah, some are still missing because the grammars are kind of confusing. These yukkuri sometimes use the weirdest grammar and vocabs. Long sentences with no kanji and difficult grammars are the worst.
EasyV said:
Though I find strange your usage of "he"/"him" when referring to yukkuri They're always referred to as female, mostly because they are based on Touhou, where there are like 3 males in the whole series, and they also talk using a female speech pattern
Honestly? It's because I was reading aglet's work on Momiji's backstory and aglet uses 彼 there so I translated that one using "he". And it stuck :p Completely forgot Touhou characters are all females.
I can change it to she when I finish proofreading this pool. No biggie.
EasyV said:
The neo yukkuri business is not different from generic shithead yukkuri expecting the world to bow down to them, just worded differently Though I didn't expect that Marisa to be so bad to the point of eating other yukkuri because "Marisa is the chosen one"
That "your easy existence is to eat up easy for us neo yukkuri" is just brutal. Dayum.
Hitosura said:
I dunno if this is gonna be the end of it.
Remember, it was a huge gap between Aglet's last story (Mister/Chen/Dosu) and when Aglet started up again (Momiji/Aya).
I wouldn't mind more, I really love this whole series. But those five are all of the main characters in the series so to speak. Concluding the series here wouldn't be out of place. A new one would probably need a different premise.
Obviously the greatest yukkuri comic of all time, this shit is so good (except part 7) that this saga deserve a whole fucking animation with voice acting to Show how glorious this comic is
Understood do!She even brought this back, saying it's for hunting practiceAlice: When you become the chief of this forest, this is the way they'll call you!Kimemaru: Ehh, that's just weird. I'm fine with just chief!Call me BOSS!!Alice: Aww, come now.
I think it's a very city sect way of calling!
YufufuChief-
Wait for me do~Pleaseee
kill meeeeHow many times do I have to tell you?
When you call for me, don't call me chief..Well, at any rate, she's eager to do her job, so I'm not gonna worry about it