Yes. It's my first time. I had to re-adjust the image so the text will fit. Hope that's okay.
EDIT: If you have critiques or suggestions for future edits, it would be greatly appreciated.
Looks good to me, good job. The only note I can make is that the "Noooo" in the first panel is not Marisa's scream, but it's supposed to be Alice's "Nhoooo".