One Yukkuri Place

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    Hitosura

    ... this one seemed particularly brutal for some reason. Like, there's been some cruel ones, but this one was just straight-up brutal.

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    Hitosura said:

    ... this one seemed particularly brutal for some reason. Like, there's been some cruel ones, but this one was just straight-up brutal.

    Probably because this time, the usual Deibu or Bawisa wasn't the victim.

    Pun Master

    What is Sanae's filling ?

    EllaLuxe

    Pun_Master said:

    What is Sanae's filling ?

    Miracle fruit jam

    mad hatter

    This could've been a cute story..fresh idea, the Sanae/frog connection, and a yu just trying to be friends. I've said before I like the green girls the most, but this isn't favoritism. This story is meh..doesn't inspire rage one side over the other, doesn't have a point and was too long for the result.

    Jackie-Chen

    It almost makes one want to do a story with an alternate storyline altogether... actually, I'd do that if I had more faith in my art skills.

    Hitosura

    mad_hatter said:

    This could've been a cute story..fresh idea, the Sanae/frog connection, and a yu just trying to be friends. I've said before I like the green girls the most, but this isn't favoritism. This story is meh..doesn't inspire rage one side over the other, doesn't have a point and was too long for the result.

    Hence, it felt pointlessly brutal.

    mad hatter

    Hitosura said:

    Hence, it felt pointlessly brutal.

    Yeah, pointlessly brutal, with (for me) more emphasis on pointless. IRL, a frog would've just hopped off. Had the artist drawn a mohawk on the frog (lol), it would've been *slightly* clever satire on a couple of levels.

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    Hitosura said:

    Hence, it felt pointlessly brutal.

    Isn't that the point of yukkuri abuse? Just throwing that out there. Heartstrings are being tugged because the abuse didn't happen to the usual Reimu or Marisa -- it happened to a favorite that isn't normally subjected to such things in most stories.

    Hitosura

    boom said:

    Isn't that the point of yukkuri abuse? Just throwing that out there. Heartstrings are being tugged because the abuse didn't happen to the usual Reimu or Marisa -- it happened to a favorite that isn't normally subjected to such things in most stories.

    mad_hatter said:

    Yeah, pointlessly brutal, with (for me) more emphasis on pointless. IRL, a frog would've just hopped off. Had the artist drawn a mohawk on the frog (lol), it would've been *slightly* clever satire on a couple of levels.

    Mister Mohawk Frog takes it REAL easy!

    mad hatter

    boom said:

    Isn't that the point of yukkuri abuse? Just throwing that out there. Heartstrings are being tugged because the abuse didn't happen to the usual Reimu or Marisa -- it happened to a favorite that isn't normally subjected to such things in most stories.

    Absent something in the dialogue, Sanae seems a nicehead. That's all it is. For an comparison of non-human abyuse, I was more pissed about the pool where a Maricha asked the anon for a ride on the RC truck and the gang of Marisas killed the Maricha afterwards. This story just seems absurd for the frog's actions-commission and duration.