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    Kolobok

    Sorry for the wait, guys. A week ago I've got ill and previous page been drawn in milder state, but next three days cough and t were no joke. Now I mostly recovered after that, sorted piled up stuff and finished this page. This time I decided to be simpler, due to low experience to do advanced stuff with available inks and nibs.

    EasyV

    I can't really follow what happens from panel 15 to panel 20
    Maybe give single scenes more space? (If you have enough paper, that is)

    Kolobok

    EasyV said:

    I can't really follow what happens from panel 15 to panel 20
    Maybe give single scenes more space? (If you have enough paper, that is)

    13,14 - hat "catches fire" as in comicbook lightbulb for "idea"
    15 - marisa declares "fap-fap time"...
    16 - ...and shooses nearby "object" for the process...
    17,18,19 - to much of alice's engrossement upon realization (18 is "oh god why" face, played with lightpole's shading)
    20 - alice fleeing, bumping into various stuff in the process.

    I may spend more paper space, but while inking "big pictures", it becoming a problem with soaking paper with ink via nib pen - soaked paper is very easy to damage, especially with pointy metal piece. I see what you mean - my style is still stabilizing.

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    Hitosura

    If it helps, coloring isn't all that necessary. Some of our best stories have no color. :3