One Yukkuri Place

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    Canttakeiteasy

    He seems to have stopped using sparkles in some of his recent works.

    EasyV

    Oh apparently this page is the end of the comic version of the anko
    I skimmed through the actual story, there is abyuse, mostly directed towards the little one

    The adult is still alive, I'm not sure about the koMarisa

    coolyo294

    EasyV said:

    Oh apparently this page is the end of the comic version of the anko
    I skimmed through the actual story, there is abyuse, mostly directed towards the little one

    The adult is still alive, I'm not sure about the koMarisa

    care to post a summary? Or is it just bog standard abyuse stuff?

    Hitosura

    coolyo294 said:

    care to post a summary? Or is it just bog standard abyuse stuff?

    It's Takumi. I'm sure you know the answer. :x

    Edit: It's not a matter of if, it's a matter of how.

    Updated by Hitosura

    EasyV

    Hitosura said:

    It's Takumi. I'm sure you know the answer. :x

    Edit: It's not a matter of if, it's a matter of how.

    But takumi just did the pictures
    The rest is taken from the anko made by someone else

    coolyo294 said:

    care to post a summary? Or is it just bog standard abyuse stuff?

    I didn't read the story, just the dialogues where koMarisa screams and adult Marisa shouts "little one" and asks the human to leave her alone

    Canttakeiteasy

    EasyV said:

    But takumi just did the pictures
    The rest is taken from the anko made by someone else

    I didn't read the story, just the dialogues where koMarisa screams and adult Marisa shouts "little one" and asks the human to leave her alone

    Takumi has done this abyuser in the rain bit before: http://oyp.yunyah.com/pools/1313

    I wonder if this work inspired this new anko?

    Hitosura

    EasyV said:

    But takumi just did the pictures
    The rest is taken from the anko made by someone else

    Would Takumi do the art if there -wasn't- abyuse?

    EasyV

    Hitosura said:

    Would Takumi do the art if there -wasn't- abyuse?

    Probably not, but for what is worth I think this story isn't in the same style as takumi's, so there's that

    GNU/Hurdz

    Hitosura said:

    Would Takumi do the art if there -wasn't- abyuse?

    There was that one phase where he was doing nothing but FF Go Nagai parodies, so he does do a wide variety of works. Looks like your bias is showing more than Takumis tbh.

    Cuttler

    So I just read the anko, here's the summary:

    Marisa and maricha were stray yukkuris father and child. One day they were rub-rubbing on a cold, raining winter night in their cardboard home, trying to fend off the cold. As a single parent, Marisa wanted to keep maricha from danger and let her take it easy as much as possible. This is when male anon, in full rain day gear and eating a lollipop, stepped in.

    Marisa was alarmed by anon's presence, as humans more often than not approach stray for the sole goal of abyuse. Anon then opened his mouth, asking if they were cold. Marisa cautiously answered yes after anon insisted for an answer, to which anon responded by reaching into his pocket and showing Marisa and maricha a picture on his smartphone.

    The picture was of anon's pet Reimu, an immaculate, beautiful pet yukkuri with very long black hair, resting gleefully on a cushion while holding up a takoyaki.
    Anon asks if they think Reimu is taking it easy, to which the two answered yes. Anon then described how nice the being indoors is on a cold, wet day like this, and how enjoyable a warm meal like takoyaki is. Marisa felt disheartened as both of which are way beyond stray yukkuri's reach.

    Anon then showed the two a picture of pet Reimu resting on the side of a large dog (presumably golden retriever, based on description) like good friends, taking it very easy. Anon says it's his cute family dog, and described how warm and nice the doggie is while pointing out the worn out, barely functional old towel Marisa has. Of course Marisa and maricha's hearts sank further

    Anon keep showing other pictures of Reimu taking it easy, including walking in the rain in full pet yukkuri rain coat (not having to be afraid of the rain) and her in the arms of anon's little brother like good pals (not having to be afraid of humans).

    This is when Marisa realized anon is not there to abyuse them physically, but to bully them: showing them the good life other yukkuri has that the two never can or will obtain.

    His intent busted, anon decided to show the two one last picture: it was one of anon's brother and Reimu eagerly waiting for hot cakes to cook on a hot plate, with honey, butter and ice cream on the side ready to be served. Anon also revealed that he's out in the rain to buy his brother's favorite chocolate sauce, and that he's actually Marisa's 'neighbor': he lives in the house just next to their cardboard box. A yukkuri's heaven and hell was literally a wall apart.

    The sweets sweets they'll never have, alongside the memories of maricha's mom stray reimu dying from malnutrition before doing please eat up, finally gave maricha a breakdown.
    Maricha recalled everything anon showed them, declared how unfair everything is and demanded to become a pet yukkuri like Reimu.
    Satisfied with seeing the reaction, anon declined light heartedly before heading home.

    The story ended with a heartbroken maricha and Marisa, both crying, and Marisa apologizing for giving birth to maricha as a stray. The sound of their wailing was washed away by the sound of the heavy rain.

    Canttakeiteasy

    Cuttler said:

    snip

    I have read an anko with a somewhat similar premise minus the rain bit.

    Thank you easy for the mister summary

    Updated by Canttakeiteasy

    GNU/Hurdz

    Purely psychological abyuse is pretty great. It's a shame we don't see it often since that's more in the realm of ankos than comics.