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    Canttakeiteasy

    I suck at Rhyming and I need better timing. Oh well at least I am not doing any miming.

    LMFAO

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    Canttakeiteasy said:

    I suck at Rhyming and I need better timing. Oh well at least I am not doing any miming.

    LMFAO

    I think if you stick to one major event per stanza and keep the verse count similar in between, you should get better flow.