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    EasyV

    End of the first day.

    Considering there are three other chapters planned, I doubt this Flandre is going to do anything significant.
    Probably kill a parent at best, getting killed at worst. Marisa seems fairly skilled.

    Of course, takumi can always pull a three chapters long carnage, but that would be pretty lame.

    Hitosura

    It's Takumi, so I'm sure they'll all wind up dead. Except Flan.

    uneasy

    Hitosura said:

    It's Takumi, so I'm sure they'll all wind up dead. Except Flan.

    With a series titled "How Marisa's Family Came to Annihilation", I'm pretty sure everyone already knows how it's ultimately going to end.

    coolyo294

    Canttakeiteasy said:

    I expect Marisa's family to prevail against all odds, killing anyone trying to mess with them as both Reimu and Marisa are faster and more capable creatures than any in the world proportionally speaking.

    Seriously, look at the size of that den and all their activities in a SINGLE day (if it is indeed a day). That's like getting 2 humans to walk several miles , digging out and carrying several tons in total of dirt and digging a medium sized cottage-space in the span of one day.

    If this is indeed one day, it is a minor plot hole if Marisa and Reimu are not super-yukkuris, LOL.

    Honest question, why are you like this? What drives you to post so frequently in the defense of sentient manjuus that essentially exist to be abused, on a website more or less dedicated to yukkuri abuse?

    Canttakeiteasy

    coolyo294 said:

    Honest question, why are you like this? What drives you to post so frequently in the defense of sentient manjuus that essentially exist to be abused, on a website more or less dedicated to yukkuri abuse?

    Why are you like this? Why can you not see the fact that I am not defending sentient manjuus but I am making fun of a plot hole?

    coolyo294

    Canttakeiteasy said:

    Why are you like this? Why can you not see the fact that I am not defending sentient manjuus but I am making fun of a plot hole?

    because no one fucking cares. it doesn't matter. this is the setup to a story about marisa and her family dying horribly. i guarantee you you're the only person who reads this and thinks about how marisa and her family are super yukkuris. it's fucking annoying and you do it all the time.

    Yukkurinator

    Incoming !!!

    Houston, we have a problem...

    Jackie-Chen

    boom said:
    be his own man?

    That is actually a big reason why I visit the site: Different perspectives. Some enjoy, others over-analyze, others yet that froth at the mouth (though those may be mostly gone). Just looking at soft-core gore without other people's input would get dull.

    Nitro

    Some people take this Yukkuri things to another level. C'mon guys. If you do not like what other people say, just ignore. Do not scroll down to comments. Simple. This is all a totally fictional thing. Why get angry on each other?
    About plot / endings: A point of view: I like the abuse stuff and I do not care much about how the story ends. By seeing the draw style sometimes I know who draw it and how it will end. But I just like the way the story goes. This story, for example, dont even have dialogue and I'm really interested. Do I know what will happen? Yes. Do I care? Nope.
    You can call me a freak but I just like to see the Yus getting f* up lol
    Of course, I like the dialogue, the plot ... it makes the story funnier. But there is only one thing I'm mostly interested: Yu abuse. There are people who don't like abuse. Will I induce a discussion about it? No. Why do that?
    I hope you do not take me wrong. It's just opinion.

    Ruukasu

    I know I said it in a forum topic, but I will say it again. I'd rather not see yukkuri become a topic of petty political debate. This is probably another reason why the yukkuri fanbase is fading.

    coolyo294

    Canttakeiteasy said:

    I do agree though that I like how Takumi depicted this family as competent enough to survive. However, I dislike the idea that they built that nest in a day because that shit is huge, proportionally speaking. No way in hell two similar sized creatures can move and clear that dirt in a day if they were not as strong as a creature several times bigger than them.

    If any regular non-superpowered yukkuri were to attack them and succeed then that would be on the same level of nonsense as black panther putting the silver surfer in an armbar and succeeding.

    Proportional strength means nothing in that regard. Ants are ridiculously strong for their size and can create immensely complex nests but they're still weak little things that are preyed on by other insects and animals. A remelia, a specialized predator yukkuri, should be able to easily kill two sleeping yus and a baby easily.

    Also, going by takumis other works, marisas and reimus are very stupid and panic prone. If the remi just kills one mate or the baby the other ones will be too frightened to do anything.

    coolyo294

    Canttakeiteasy said:

    and Marisa and Reimu are panic prone and incapable huh?

    http://oyp.yunyah.com/posts/63984?tags=parent%3A63982+status%3Aany

    Then the bodied remi swings her arm down and smashes both of them because they're weak little blobs of bean paste.

    And yes, takumi's reimus/marisas are panic prone and incapable. This pool in particular is the first one to come to mind http://yukkuri.shii.org/pools/1394 but most stories he's written featuring them has them shut down and panic the second shit goes down.

    TosylChloride

    Let's just arm this Flan with a AGM-114 missile pack and a GAU-8 30mm autocannon with a combination of HEI and API rounds on each wing and send it in to deal with this Marisa and Reimu couple.

    They may be super yukkuris that managed to dig a relatively huge den within a day or two, but they're not going to stand in the way of a tankbusting Flan. "Tankbusting Flan", does that sound ridiculous to you? Well, if there exist absurdly powerful super yukkuris, then there're bound to be absurly strong predators as well that can carry the load of an A-10 Warthog or two to deal with them.

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