One Yukkuri Place

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    EasyV

    Honestly this comic is pretty boring and the page count isn't really worth it.
    I had read it on pixiv, but it's just too damn long.
    Thanks to the uploader for giving up his sanity for us.

    Nitro

    EasyV said:

    Honestly this comic is pretty boring and the page count isn't really worth it.
    I had read it on pixiv, but it's just too damn long.
    Thanks to the uploader for giving up his sanity for us.

    if a yu suffer, it all worth it lol

    excalivern

    EasyV said:

    Honestly this comic is pretty boring and the page count isn't really worth it.
    I had read it on pixiv, but it's just too damn long.
    Thanks to the uploader for giving up his sanity for us.

    Look on the bright side, at least this story finally has an ending here

    EasyDeibu

    EasyV said:

    Honestly this comic is pretty boring and the page count isn't really worth it.
    I had read it on pixiv, but it's just too damn long.
    Thanks to the uploader for giving up his sanity for us.

    I personally liked quite a few parts in it, like starvation part and nightmares part. Also occasional coloring of specific highlighted things.

    Wanted to post all at once, but OYP went down in the middle of the process. Had to wait for it to get back up and then for working day to be over before finishing.

    Updated by EasyDeibu

    EasyV

    excalivern said:

    Look on the bright side, at least this story finally has an ending here

    Ehh, I guess.

    EasyDeibu said:

    I personally liked quite a few parts in it, like starvation part and nightmares part. Also occasional coloring of specific highlighted things.

    It's true that there are some interesting concept, but it's the execution that is lacking.
    It's longer and more wordy than necessary.
    It's 113 pages long, when 70 or so would've been more than enough.

    JusticeItEasy

    I suspect it could be an unbalanced proportion of text vs "actual events" taking place.

    When doing this "non comics" works, that can easily affect the pacing and enjoyment if going too long without a more active and "busy" page being used to reignite interess.