that little shit was raped or something? Look at the size of its hole lol
Well something like that
Maricha is the idol of a stray family. One day a human came and challenge Maricha to a "game of happiness" which is to prove if Maricha is the most happiness yukkuri in the world. Maricha begin to brag about it's cardbroad house, straw bed and easy meal, but the human counter it by showing a video about pet yukkuri which include a huge house, fluffy bed and sweet-sweet. Maricha then brag about she is loved by it's parent, but the human ask the parent to trade Maricha for a bag of candy, which they agreed.
Maricha is heart-broken by this, but the human said the game is still not over and if Maricha win , he will return it to the family along with more sweet-sweet. It's parent quickly encourage their child to agreed and Maricha proudly accept. The human pull out a tube lighter and stuck it into Maricha's anaryu then light it. Maricha squirming in pain, she tried to scream but the human quickly stuff it mouth with an orange candy, which heal it's burning wound. Seeing Maricha , the parents begin to worry but the human explain that she is just show happy she is thru dancing and she is winning the game. The parent begin to cheer in joy while Maricha inside is burning and her anaryu is slowy expanding.
After a while the human declare Maricha is indeed the most happiness yukkuri in the world. He then return a fainting Maricha to it's parents and told them Maricha must be tired after working so hard, so he will give them extra sweet-sweet. The parent rejoy, praising Maricha while insluting the human for being too dumb to challenge their child.
Maricha wake up at night seeing it's parent is currently munching sweet-sweet. Remember that they sell her to be abused for sweet-sweet, it try to yell at them for being shitty parent but was too weak to do it. Maricha's parent notice their child wake up, hurried to Maricha and begin to praising her for defeating the shitty human and bringing many sweet-sweet.
Hearing that, Maricha quickly forget about the hurbish and become smug again, demanding a candy. But for some reason, Maricha cannot eat it. It's parent assume it still to tired and begin chewing the candy then feed it to Maricha. Still it cannot eat the sweet , as if the meal cannot enter it's body.
Turn out most of her paste in the back has been harden thru constant burning and the orange candy healing it, completly block all food from enter Maricha body. On top of that, her anaryu is expanding so much that water is leaking out of it. Maricha became weaker as day pass by and her parent has no idea how to cure it. Then, the human, with his lighter, came back to check on the family....
More like the author does not know how to make sense of his own story when he has all the opportunity to make it make sense.
Turn out most of her paste in the back has been harden thru constant burning and the orange candy healing it, completly block all food from enter Maricha body. On top of that, her anaryu is expanding so much that water is leaking out of it.
I mean, really? I know abyuse stories are rarely praised for a coherent plot but this is ridiculous. Food cannot be eaten by maricha who can open her mouth just fine and has a leaky expanding anyaru that magically makes sure that none of the solid matter comes out but only fluid comes out? Sure....right...
It even has magical orange candy that heals its wounds just enough that internal damage remain for some reason which should be one of the first things the medicine would cure considering Marisa ate the candy through her mouth then it stands to reason it will pass through her stomach and the healing effects would reach its butt.
Canttakeiteasy said: *Angry Can't Take It Easy Noises*
It's just the typical magic of combining something that hurts them with something that super heals them, reaching a point it usually deform or mutate them negatively and remain like that.
Kinda how boiling orange juice can do that and similar shenanigans.
About the only water coming out thing, it maybe related to how peeing may not necessarily be linked to some sort of bladder and instead is more about expelling excess humidity from the body, maybe that was the only thing left for it after having it's whole lower half cooked to the point of being some hardened burnt paste. But that's just my theory.
Something that kinda bothers me is how the artist made the orange candy look more like a lump of some sort of paste...
Also a bit of a fix
Canttakeiteasy said: I mean, really? I know yukkuri stories are rarely praised for a coherent plot but this is ridiculous.
No need to thank me, just doing my Job reminding people that magical food stuff golems are ridiculous by default and rarely coherent.
I mean at this point Yukkuri logic is a constant "NO U" battle between opposing forces so whatever happens is depending of the side that has control.
No it cant. It will hurt those that will get hurt from boiling liquid but orange juice will heal them, they will be in constant pain for as long as the liquid is still boiling unless and until they mutate or die.
This particular story is a lot more nonsense than usual
JusticeItEasy said:
No need to thank me, just doing my Job reminding people that magical food stuff golems are ridiculous by default and rarely coherent.
Rarely coherent? Most stories have a set of yukkuri characteristics, stock phrases and stock biological processes within reason. Most stories make sense somehow.
This is not even the case where the author sticks a middlefinger at the previous depictions of a similar situation like 9th does by other author but him poking three opening sized holes in his own cup and expect the said cup to still hold water.
JusticeItEasy said: I mean at this point Yukkuri logic is a constant "NO U" battle between opposing forces so whatever happens is depending of the side that has control.
This is not the case that abyuse fic writers are writing this fic because they want to depict abyuse but a writer not paying attention to his own story.
JusticeItEasy said: Something that kinda bothers me is how the artist made the orange candy look more like a lump of some sort of paste...
I doubt that is the same orange candy but rather whatever passes for sweet sweets that maricha's parents chewed to feed her.
Canttakeiteasy said: Rarely coherent? Most stories have a set of yukkuri characteristics, stock phrases and stock biological processes within reason. Most stories make sense somehow.
The thing is that only having a basis everybody gravitates into, doesn't assure coherence always.
Sometimes creators and writes make things behave in certain way because they want it that way, see for example coffee on yukkuris, originally Coffee wasn't deadly only disgusting to the point of making them vomit but you needed a certain ammount to trigger the puke and if you somehow wanted to kill them via coffee you needed use LOADS so it trigger enough vomiting for the loss to kill them. But this was only via ingestion, yukkuris as much got annoyed by they touched it so a bath would as worse just be unpleasant as long as they ingested nothing.
As time went on, someone decided that Coffee was the bitter paralel of Spicy stuff for yukkuris, the only difference being that while Spice made them go red like a cartoon while convulsing, vomiting and writhing in pain because of the internal "hotness", Coffee made them convulse, vomit and writhe in pain because "bitter" but no weird body deformation, redness or anything.
Then one day someone decided to make bitter stuff be like a weird parallel to that toxic waste acidic thing from Robocop, so if you splashed or feed a yu with it, it would do everything it did before alongside it's skin drying it up and cracking to the point of some out of nowhere cases of the affected yu's becoming skinless while still suffering all the other symptoms, no real explanation of "why" or how that made sense.
Hell even spice sometimes is potrayed in nonsensical way like actually making yukkuris combust in fire on certain locations like eyes, tongue, accesories and flaps/braids, no reason, only because "Spice is Hot".
The same can even be said of the more "benign" or at least non inmediately dangerous substances, originally orange juice could heal and such, but it was more an internal healing so if the yukkuri had a gash you were forced to patch it up with flower and dough, maybe even having to insert filling. Then someone went and gave it a small wolverinesque "light gashes can suddenly close on it's own" to the mix and then someone went that bathing a yu on it would not just heal them even from big wounds but even regrow filling and similar things.
Ramune would go from just a normal sleep inducer to literally the paralel of knock out gass or anesthesia meaning that you could do whatever you wanted on the yu and it wouldn't wake up because of how powerful it was-
Syrup was basically more akin to Sugary Water or Orange Juice only more "premium" since yukkuris liked it more food wise, but now someone made it so if you make a yukkuri chug down loads of it, or someone injects it into them, it magically covers all the paste core making it harder to break.
That's where I stopped caring much about how this bases could be warped into super nonsensical stuff that when you really think about it, makes no sense, it only connects to the basic core ideas like sweet stuff is good for yukkuris and bitter or spicy stuff is bad for them, etc. but there is no real reasoning or proper expanation why Bitter can turn theri skin dry and somehow allow them to remain alive long enough to be skinless yukkuris or how Spicy food not only may ignite them internally but even generate steam.
Maybe you could say it's the dark cartoonish side of them but yukkuris have only basis and a few rules, but they tend to be bended, warped or outright ignored by people thinking as long as "enough of the core and basis are there it's fine".
Would be nice to have a more coherent and defined lore and rule set? Sure...but being fanwork of a fanwork that was more an annoying meme than anything, usually leads to this kind of situations, as I said the "NO U" situation, even in the same camps of the fandom.
It doesnt need to make sense. Sometimes the lack of sense make the story even funnier. Yukkuri by itself is a total lack of sense. Argue about logic in a yukkuri story is like arguing about physics in super heroes movies. And the biology of these things works different on each author story. A lot of people already said that. For example, some stories, a yukkuri doesn't have core, while others it has. Some stories the yus can hop to move faster. In others they barely can be touched. I'm here just to watch those things getting fucked up and every author does it nice, in their own way. Logic is something i'm caring less and less on stories.
Well Canttakeiteasy's question make sense, so i re-read it and hope this will be a suitable answer
The lighter the human use is ones with a long tube like this https://global.rakuten.com/zh-tw/store/cocotte/item/924039/ , and he only stuck the tip into Maricha's anaryu rather than the whole tube. Maricha burned paste is not harden like rock or anything but lumpy charcoal-like. Also it not like food cannot enter Maricha body but rather it cannot be digested,store inside or poop out, so Maricha just kinda vomit the whole meal.
On another note, i have a hard time translated the title of this anko. I assuming chaawache is a extreme slurred form of shiawase which is Happiness. Can someone well-versed in easyspeak help me on this one
Yeah considering the whole argument between Maricha and Anon was about happiness that's probably the meaning ony slurred because trolling the koyukkuri.