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    Caught from behind while chasing a grasshopper...

    Immediately after capture Marisa hated the threatening atmosphere.
    In the future she will be teased (pinching and stuff) until her heart opens.

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    So cruel :(

    *kills the girl and lets out the yukkuri*


    This is a makako classic, she's nice to it later.

    But what's Alice doing with that teacup? The angle it's at, it doesn't look like she's drinking from it.

    Or it might be something else entirely.


    I think it's hypocritical some people have problems with yukkuri abuse (hell, this is soft compared to most material) but have no problems expressing a desire to harm other people. Anyway Moeman is right.


    I should have phrased that better... some have problems with yukkuri abuse but have no problems with violence against humans in the scope of these works.


    Trying to kill Alice would not end well for whoever is trying.


    Erm... Vordreller, that's absurdly disproportionate. "Keeping it in a box, which it's sad about" isn't really worth retribution -- especially given that she treats it nicely later -- and certainly not death.

    There's plenty of pics here that have characters (yukkuri, human, or youkai) who do deserve some sort of comeuppance for their behavior -- whether death or something more minor -- but this isn't one of them.


    Thanks for reviving a half year old thread just to put in your own comments about stuff already covered millions of times.


    New pool. Mixed translated and untranslated pages because there are no duplicates of each. Is that acceptable?


    Looks fine to me. Not sure it's in the right order, and I think there's some bits missing... post #1649, maybe post #40003 aaaaand I just realized makako's blog is still up so I'll try to check there when I have time.

    So many kanji...


    I didn't think post #1649 is part of the pool. Comment below suggest different context.

    post #40003 looks like an "after" page, when a story is finished. Will put it in. Don't know why I didn't before lol.

    Also, what's the source? I'd like to put it in the pool description if possible.

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    Sources are tagged per-image, see the "Source:" field on the left under the tag list. post #21 and post #1649 are both from, which is why I suggested the latter should be in the pool - though it doesn't seem to be part of the storyline so linking it as a child might be better.

    None of the other posts have proper source links though, which is why I'd have to check the blog. I have to be somewhere in a few hours, but I'll check it out later unless another moonreader beats me to it.


    I hunted down the sources, and linked them to the proper blog post(Most of these are linked improperly). That should make it easier for you. I'm also putting in duplicates of the posts. Just in case, or simply for completion.


    2008.05.17 Sat

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