Please do. The poor kid deserves to be remembered for her awesome optimism and kindness, that is if this is the original end of Orphan Alice. I liked yours a lot. ;_;
;_; Add my piece of pity to the altar please. The poor kid deserved the happiest ending like no other. I can't believe it's not even the work of a human anon and this is what she gets.
Ack! Pity turns into vengeance. Let's go fuck that shithead Alice. A human intervention is needed. Time to carry out pgraphics' ending.
Speaking of that, maybe Papa Marisa and Mama Alice should have just let Alichu with them. They send the kid back to the living world and help her survive from Flan only for her to end up with that Alice....
This time, if we do as Warui says, I think we'd have to do a pic featuring even worse things happening to big Alice... in addition to the original 'pull out all of her teeth with pliers', of course.
But ultimately Alichu should be happy. I loved pgraphics' approach because it was a sensible way of a happy ending rather than "and somehow everything was in order. Alichu lived happily ever after."