excellent works as always, fly.
Fly you are becoming the Western Kiriraita, the only difference, aside of art style, being you are willing to make real shitheads!
You too can own this look of satisfaction
This is why fly is one of my favorites.
Such an aberrant looking Patchuolli.
Excellent work. You did a good job of portraying Fatchouli as the arrogant and spiteful yukkuri it is. That little pee spurt shows you pay attention to detail. Just one thing- the font for the "SLAP" sound effect doesn't do the effect justice- I recommend something thicker.
Also, those two characters at the end remind me of Guts and Caska- large man with a square jaw and damaged eye and a dark-skinned woman with black hair.
Yukkuri comments aside, im diggin' that black skinned lady
The one thing I think you do amazingly that which I agree with SUN on is your detailing. The little things you carried from previous pages and other things you put in ,whether artistically or in writing, has a fun touch thus making it pleasing to the eyes.
I try to make my pages as quick as possible for this little game but I think your pages are just too great to do that. Whatever pace you work at, if the future pages look anything like this, I'd approve.
Overall great page.
dat brown lady
Now I know why this didn't make sense. I was reading right to left
Anon said:PIMPSMACK YO ASS, BITCH!
Very satisfying, thank you for that
Fly. Holy crap. That's some beautiful art you got there. All the panels (especially the Fatchouli ones) are perfect!
Also dat female partner fffffff.
fly is the best
also dat remi mouth
It's amusing how fatchouli isn't really disrespectful to Anon. It kind of does something for her character.
You have Frag to thank for that characteristic. I find it humorous myself.
Thank you all very much for the encouragement and feedback; it means a lot to me. I'm really glad you guys enjoyed it.
By the way, Fly... I just noticed something: That last panel that Fatchouli is in, is that a tooth I see? Did he hit her so hard it knocked a tooth out?
He didn't knock out just one. He knocked out three[/b] of them.I'm just wondering how friendly she'll still be towards him.
i think im gonna deviate a little when its my turn, i still have problems with anatomy
I was kinda losing interest in this series. Too many people trying to one up each other with more and more twists and characters. How, pray tell, did you manage to tie everything together, and have the best looking page?Its amazing!
Fly got some kickass skills.
Fragtagonal said:I was kinda losing interest in this series. Too many people trying to one up each other with more and more twists and characters. How, pray tell, did you manage to tie everything together, and have the best looking page?Its amazing!
Easy. Fly did not do any magic by adding any new characters to the story, or twists, or "trying to one up each other" in general. All Fly worked on is what's already in the story, then simply moved it to the most ideal direction this story should go. It's what differentiates the true classic stories from your flavor of the month seasonal series.