GJ on the translation!Now to kill the perpetrators....
Yes, thank you for the translations.
great thanks. happiness~
thx a lot
yay! it's a good time to revenge~
there's word "Revenge is Sweet" i believe that the feared of Alice is not gonna let u down~
Great job alphamone. Might I recommend a new font like Wild Words for these edits and a bit of centering? Wild Words can be found on /rs/ or something like that. Otherwise, AWESOME
I'm awaiting JUSTICE. Great job Alpha!
I think it would look better when the text is center-aligned. Here is basically the same font as Wild Words:
But you can use any font that doesn't look boring, just no over-the-top fonts that distract the eyes.
havent installed a font before, where do i need to extract the files to?
>where do i need to extract the files to?
You dump the files in C:\Windows\Fonts and it'll install itself.
Thank very much for translation.
Also, I think you need an editor; that's not to insult your English skills but we need to get the best possible translation, agree? An editor just proofreads what you've translated for errors and suggests better figure of speech.
Caps show mistakes:
"As I held heR up in my arms, crying, she gave aN anguished responSe."
And one more thing: use different fonts for human and yukkuri speech. All of the things I've told here aren't super important, but they add a certain polish to the picture.
plus after every "." use space once it would make it look better
and also after every "?" or "..." there's no need to add a "." again
oh god I thought I'd never feel anything for these little guys :(
I thought my hatred for Alice couldn't get any higher.
is there anyone onto the rest of the pages ?
A yukkuri apologizing and admitting a failed duty and not blaming someone else on it?GASPGASP
Maybe there still are some reasonable yukkuris left in the world...er, their world.
can't wait to see what happens! this yukkuri is worth sympathizing with