But this Mister is a yukkuri lover, not abyuser. Well, this Sakuya might be real, but it's a Twilight Zone ending either way.
Here's an idea. Yukkuri, after being abyused for so long, decided to start disappearing from this world in their collective consciousness. They left a curse that human, especially abyuser, will start losing ability to differentiate, and mistake human (especially weaker people) as yukkuri.
For example, they might kick a child on the street, and when confronted, only think the person angry at them is a shitty yukkuri lover.
But this Mister is a yukkuri lover, not abyuser. Well, this Sakuya might be real, but it's a Twilight Zone ending either way.
Here's an idea. Yukkuri, after being abyused for so long, decided to start disappearing from this world in their collective consciousness. They left a curse that human, especially abyuser, will start losing ability to differentiate, and mistake human (especially weaker people) as yukkuri.
For example, they might kick a child on the street, and when confronted, only think the person angry at them is a shitty yukkuri lover.
That sounds like a twist ending Game2002 should have written in his last yukkuri fanfic.
His first story was interesting, then it turned into an incoherent mess that I stopped caring about. The writing turned into something that read like the author was suffering from alzheimers, with absolutely no plot point other than him jerking off smash characters. It was a soapbox in the shape of a poorly written story about "smash characters", and I use that term loosely because they had no personality whatsoever. Funny thing is if he had listened to the advice from many people on the forums the story might've turned out well.
Then he turned into a spambot posting "read good story here!", so whatever.
His first story was interesting, then it turned into an incoherent mess that I stopped caring about. The writing turned into something that read like the author was suffering from alzheimers, with absolutely no plot point other than him jerking off smash characters. It was a soapbox in the shape of a poorly written story about "smash characters", and I use that term loosely because they had no personality whatsoever. Funny thing is if he had listened to the advice from many people on the forums the story might've turned out well.
Then he turned into a spambot posting "read good story here!", so whatever.
Still a better love story than twilight though.
But, no, seriously.
Tell us what you -really- think. :D
-snickers- Anyway, yeah, this is rather interesting, and when the (rough) translation came through, instantly shot me back to my story, where abyuse was, overall in society, decided to be a public health issue. If you can abyuse a yukkuri, you'll abuse a dog, a kid, or even a spouse. Sadistic serial killers often view their victims as 'it,' so as to not ever actually acknowledge them as human (Silence of the Lambs -- 'it puts the lotion on its skin?'). Maybe this is the trigger point, where people can't tell the difference any more between human and yukkuri.
The fact that she was naked kind of eludes to possible rape.
I think she's naked because yukkuris don't really "wear" clothes as they don't have a body. She wasn't a bodied yukkuri and thus didn't need clothes. (that would give away the twist though?) Though it's far more likely that the author just kinda got lazy and didn't want to draw clothes.
I think drawing parallels with yukkuri abuse to RL is always kinda iffy, because it depends on so much how the yukkuris came into being to begin with. Realistically I think if they suddenly showed up one day they'd be treated more like the aliens in district 9 (the movie), where as if they existed all along the world would be so different that it'd be hard to apply a parallel on top of them. Were they domesticated? Did they always speak your language? etc etc... and their physiology draws so much questions into biology and metaphysics that it's better to think of them as minor youkais than an "animal", so to speak. How did people of gsk treat youkais? And how would they treat them if they had modern technology? I think that'd be our closest answer.
So realistically authors apply some strict limits on the world. Hard rules on how yukkuris can/cannot get treated because otherwise its strays directly into sci-fi.
I think she's naked because yukkuris don't really "wear" clothes as they don't have a body. She wasn't a bodied yukkuri and thus didn't need clothes. (that would give away the twist though?) Though it's far more likely that the author just kinda got lazy and didn't want to draw clothes.
Rewatch Fight Club.
What do you think he was actually wearing when he walked around? What we saw, or what he saw himself wearing?
I think she's naked because yukkuris don't really "wear" clothes as they don't have a body. She wasn't a bodied yukkuri and thus didn't need clothes. (that would give away the twist though?) Though it's far more likely that the author just kinda got lazy and didn't want to draw clothes.
Five years late, but internet.
Clothes can used as a way of control. The most common example are prisoners in jail. The orange jumpsuits or the black and white stripes are designed to strip away a prisoner's individuality (and dehumanize them). Its the idea of "I control your clothes, I control YOU" in addition to everything else (food, shelter, freedom of movement, etc). Nudity is a variant of that, you just don't hear/see such cases because the media censors it on pornographic grounds.
As for the story itself, maybe the artist's other works just aren't posted here, but this story by itself, as itself is just plain shallow. The point is obvious, but its so blunt and quick that you could tell me that the last 3 pages are from a different artist wanting to make a "comeuppance" ending and I'd believe you.
His first story was interesting, then it turned into an incoherent mess that I stopped caring about. The writing turned into something that read like the author was suffering from alzheimers, with absolutely no plot point other than him jerking off smash characters. It was a soapbox in the shape of a poorly written story about "smash characters", and I use that term loosely because they had no personality whatsoever. Funny thing is if he had listened to the advice from many people on the forums the story might've turned out well.
Then he turned into a spambot posting "read good story here!", so whatever.
Still a better love story than twilight though.
Yeah,he had wasted potential. As a MUGENite,crossover FG stories are THE shit. Sadly,he decided to use that to go anti-abyuse. I kinda want to make my own yukkuri crossover fic,involving Shadaloo (from SF) or N.E.S.T.S (from KOF) making genetically modified yukkuri to fund their criminal enterprises.