One Yukkuri Place

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-shrugs- Took me like, two months to pump out that one long chapter. Little here, little there. Doing that now. Just been really tired lately.

Anyway, you're doing it for free, so being lazy is fine. :P Just take it easy.

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  • boom said:

    Remember, it's a fictional work. If you don't like the direction of the existing work, create your own.

    It'd be nice to see some positive content now and then. If I could draw, I'd draw my story, rather than type it.

    Speaking of which, I need to get off my butt and keep going. xD

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  • MTMoose said:

    Well she's definitely crazy, but Remi is happy and I guess she is too, so...happy end?

    Also thanks karinbat for the uploads and translations lately!

    Yep. In spite of what happened to her, she turned her craziness into a tool to help another.

    Happy end.

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  • Interesting story. Not so much focus on abyuse as it is what happened afterwards -- how she became a sadist, but her paste couldn't recover from the trauma (and stayed sweet). So, she trained the Remilia by letting her eat her paste (a little at a time so she doesn't die). For a Silver, she's smart. She just has that shattered psyche that emerges when she feels pain.

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  • Huh. Interesting. I would think that lemonade would prolong their lifespan, since everything about them is effectively 'opposite' from normal yukkuri. Or spicy foods.

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  • Yeah, I was curious about what this was trying to go for.

    So, she refreshed into the branch, and the children burst into some kind of... I dunno, refresh yukkuri that cause yukkuri to become impregnated on contact?

    Still, cool work.

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  • MTMoose said:

    I could see her escaping the car, or another yukkuri saving her, but yeah I seriously doubt this ends well for her.

    Do they ever? xD I mean, I'd actually be shocked if this ended on a high note.

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  • MTMoose said:

    Looks like an interesting story, seems the ko just has the usual horrible luck of most lonely koyukkuri strays.

    Yeah, but I'm not getting my hopes up. Wish I could, but after all the stories I've read, that car's probably gonna squish her dead. :/ Or she dies from starvation/loneliness/despair.

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  • Kind of a boring story.

    Not as if we didn't see this ending coming.

    Let's see:
    Poor, dirty stray: check
    Destitute, hungry: check
    Accessory destroyed: check
    Home destroyed: check
    Raped: check
    Killed by Mister Human: oh, wait... guess we missed one.

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  • One of the biggest inconsistency in the yuniverse:
    The speed at which stalk babies grow up/drain their parent, and the fact that Takumi broke an old rule here: yukkuri can't generally mate with their same type (injecting the same-filling into the same-filling doesn't really... work?)

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  • My instincts pulled me to it. I could sense this was one helluva story.

    Speaking of which, gotta start working more on mine. Got two BIG surprises for you guys. xD

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  • Thank you. Interesting. So she was stolen from the factory for some random kid/employee to beat-up. Possibly just because she was a platinum.

    But instead of going back to the factory, she opted to just live on her own.

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  • BaronMind said:

    Mister could be waiting a long time... there's lots more mister text than in mister prologue...

    I'm more patient than you give credit. Take your time.

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  • BaronMind said:

    Wait easyyyyyy Cirno can't translate loooooots!?

    I'll wait, so you can translate easy. I'd like to know what's going on in this part of the story before moving to the next, anyway. :3

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