Wrathkal said: Need I remind you of a certain Ayazou story where Reimu and Yukari's child was a TOTAL SHITHEAD with a shithead level of over 9000, way beyond Senou Natsuru's denseness, strong enough to PIERCE THE HEAVENS?
Crucifying them would be a mercy. The last thing we want to do is make a martyr of scum.
I vote for corruption. A couple of raper alice, for starters.
This is an interesting story, yet another take on how despite all good intentions, Mister Human will always find themselves tested by these so-called bringers of "Easiness". Also, the real reason why the universe hates yukkuri: they bring misfortune down on themselves.
I like how you manage to inject character and depth in the world your stories are set in. Little details, like Anon's interjections while monologuing and "Mariela" and "Regina" as localized names for the two yukkuri makes the setting come alive.
As a suggestion, how about posting your story in the forum (make a new topic) or in the wiki (under "text_stories" tag) next time? That way, viewers won't be clobbered by your wall of comment stories.