Incorrect translations, would like to ask the correction. English is difficult...
First of all, thank you once again for sharing.
Your translations are fine even if they are not accurate. Understanding the gist of what is said is what is most important. Leave it to more capable English translations to correct them.
Explosion said: Huh... I'm looking at the story and even though I'm not sure what's going on, the author is actually nice enough to give clear translations(in japanese) of the yukkuri-speak next to everything the yukkuri say.
The only thing I can say is that some yukkuri do indeed get their asses kicked by a chicken.
From what I can read, it's the typical foiled home invasion (farm invasion) scenario. Clearly, anyone can look badass when beating up shitheads, even a chicken.
This said: ^Which way? Fiery explosion, multi-mile fall or being pelted by yukkuri at terminal velocity? Personally, I think the middle-one isn't a bad way to go.
The worst way to die? What happened to the anko.
Specifically, the last remaining yukkuri, who miraculously survived the fall from the height, cushioned by the remains of the millions of yukkuri below them (not an exaggeration, the title of the anko is apparently "Over A Million Kos Falling From The Sky", only for the very last thing they see is the burning remains of the aircraft landing on top of them, crushing and incinerating everything slowly but surely.
Trololo said: it looks like a pack of orange juice to me. I would assume it's made to constantly suffer pain only to heal because of the OJ. But of course without a summary of the anko it's hard to tell for sure.
You're close, but after skimming the anko, it's actually much, much worse.
The Komarisa's "house" is made up of the remains of her Marisa parent.
Dave37 said: it's kinda funny, usually the anon lives and the yukkuri die but now the man is possible infected and might die so the yukkuri family did get it's revenge on the mister!
yukiyuzen said: Oh and I'm not seeing how this is "fitting_consequences" since both the anko and comic explicitly state that Adult Marisa's death was purely an accident, but whatever.
The fitting_consequences was referring to the mother and child's fates, daddy marisa's accident notwithstanding. Whatever, indeed,
starshine said: How was this one justice? Just looks like normal abuse.
Check the discussion at the comments in the original pages. That said, like you I wonder just how how much leeway justice can be interpreted (even for a subjective tag).