Can't say I approve of rewriting things as what you think they should be as opposed to what they are, but hey, as long as you're up-front about having made such changes.
Don't sweat it. I'm a translation purity nazi, but ultimately if you're up front if you're taking liberties or not sure I won't rage. I just get my panties in a wad when people just overwrite what was actually being said/narrated and give no clue as to what was actually there. Seems dishonest to me. But don't mind me too much either way. I'm just part of the peanut gallery.