This kind of crap is nice from time to time too. I'm assuming it counts as family_friendly and non_violent due to the overall ending in spite of that vicious forehead flick.
lol, i like this one, it's pretty nice. I also noticed that the patch remained in the same size from when it was a normal yukkuri while the rest of the hat grow proportional to the dosu, now that's ain interesting detail.
Marisa being an arrogant or a pest is bit debatable, I think. She does look like she's trying to invade a house in the first frame (the little house in the speech bubble), but it seems she forgets all about that and wants to beat anon instead. Looks like they became proper friends once anon fixed her hat. She was lucky to find such a mellow anon.
Also, I'd find it pretty funny if the Marisa still can't beat the anon even though she became a dosu.
Either she stopped being an idiot after the anon fixed the hat, or considering she isn't that big, the anon still has ways to defeat it, but overall they stopped fighting since it was pointless.
It feels like this should be an illustration... anyway, it seems to me it goes that Marisa comes along, demands a home from anon. Anon shoves it away and gets on with stuff. The next day, Marisa comes back, wants a fight, anon shoves Marisa away again, it comes back for more, the hat gets torn. Anon repairs it because he feels sorry for it or another reason. The two become friends over long, long time and Marisa becomes a Dosu because anon teaches her to be a non-yukkuri yukkuri or something.
In hindsight, that's pretty obvious. Derp. Anyway... this isn't on the tracker yet so there's no comments that might indicate if it's an illustration or not. Because it feels like it really is one.
[Human! Battle Marisa!] [Huh? Battle?] [That's right! Fight with the great Marisa, and once the great Marisa wins, hand over that house!] [Whatever...alright? Bring it on] [Fufun, I shall praise you for your courage! Here I go!] Boing Boing Boing...Thump! [Yuhehe...Why didn't you falllllll!] [You thought I'd fall you idiot, forehead flick!] [Forehead hurdzzzzz! DAMMIDDDD I'll remember thissss!] [What a lively thing...Fuaaa Guess I'll take a nap now]
[Human! Revenge match! You shall taste the great Marisa's new certain kill technique!] [You came again. Even though you should have realized how futile it was last time.] [Shuddup! Take this and be blown away!] Boing Boing Boing...Twirl Twirl Twirl...Thump! [....Even though you were hit by the great Marisa's Rolling Attack, you still standdddd!] [All you did was spin a bit didn't you? You stupid or something? Forehead flick!] [Yugii!?]
[Human! I've come once again to settle the score!] [This is the tenth time...so stubborn] [Tenth time with integrity! Here I go! New certain kill technique!] Boing boing boing boing...Stretch Stretch, thump! [...I admire your effort for coming up with something different every time, but there's something I want to do now...forehead flick] [Yungiiiiii! I'll remember thissssss!]
[Here again huh...err What's with your hat? There's a hole in it] [I, I just got in a little fight...a,anyway, it doesn't matter! Let's figh-*Yank* Give back the great Marisa's beautiful hatttt!?] [Ah ah, a big hole. Wait a sec.]
[Here] [Yu?...Yuwaaaa...The great Marisa's hat is fixedddd!] [Well, I had time to kill] [Human! Than...fight! Let's fight! here I go! Thump Flick! [Forehead hurdzzzzzz! I'll remember this thankssssssss!]
[Mister human, I've come to fight...? What's wrong?] [COUGH COUGH! Nothing...Even though a year has passed, you really don't give up do you...COUGH] [You don't look well...] [I just have a little cold! I'm fine, so bring it on and fight...wobble wobble] [Th,that's right! The world of fighting is always unusual! Here I go! Boing boing boing... [...What's wrong?] [Marisa has to poop poop soon, so I'm going home! You have escaped death human! Yuu Yuuu! Ooh...toilet toilet...Uho, Reimu!] [...What a waste of effort..guess I'll sleep]
[Dad, come live with us] [That's right, father, since you're getting old, living in this house by yourself must becoming inconvenient for you? [.................I ain't moving] [Dad, please don't say that] [Battle! Mister human!]
[Hmph, you came huh, and you got ridiculously big even] [Yufufu, Dosu has trained very hard to become strong! Now! I will settle the score today! Mister human!] [Wha,what's with that Marisa...so big...] [It's a Dosu Marisa...Run away dad!] [Shut it! Now, bring it on Marisa!] [Here I go!] THUD! THUD! THUD!....Thump [....Well? Did it work? Dosu's certain kill technique] [...It didn't work at all! Forehead flick!] FLICK [Owowowowowowww! I guess I really can't win against mister human!] [Hmph, making me waste effort like thatt...ooh...wobble...thump] [Mister human, are you alright? Since you're getting old, you should take it easy?] [Oh shuttup! I don't need you worrying about me!]
[That's the reason he doesn't want to move isn't it...] [...No need to force him to live with us I guess, we'll just come and visit more often.]
I say Scum with Potential mainly because she's surprisingly formal and with some degree of respect, even if clearly arrogant and a bit delusional, but no shitty mister, eat my poo poo, etc.
I got the impression from the story that Marisa's goal became to challenge the old man. Notice how she, unlike a lot of shitheads, didn't forget or misinterpret her defeat. She KNEW she was defeated and wanted to try harder. Still an idiot, but I laughed a bit and kind of understand why she wasn't killed by the old man. It's like Rocky.
Some say that becoming Dosu is like becoming older, that somehow some yukkuris may live beyond 2 or 5 years and when they go beyond 10 they may become Dosu.
Of course it's all theory, but maybe you can say that the paralel of the man getting old, is the marisa going dosu.
If you think of becoming a "dosuyukuri" is somewhat similar to asian myths of animals becoming sentient youkai, it makes sense. The yukkuri normally lives 3-5 years, then dies. If it somehow lives longer and grows more powerful, it will become a dosuyukkuri. As a dosuyukkuri, your chances of survival drops severely because you begin to collect yukkuris and attract a lot of attention. But if it manages to survive for a long time... maybe it becomes a youkai.
Kinda like how a youkai fox gets an additional tail for every 100 year it lives.