Another sketchy piece of crap. I have to find the apropriate markers to ink my drawings so they don't look like crap. Untill then I'll just be a pencil guy.
Yeah I know. Kinda taking it one thing at a time. Drawing yukkuri is more important that drawing trash right now lol What about the Reimu? I like her shape like that....
Not sure exactly whats bothering me about the Reimu. I think either her hair is a little too long in the front or her face is too high up. Not sure exactly what it is, but its somewhere in that region.
Looks good! If I was to guess, I think that what might be "off" is that the shading on Reimu's hair makes the hair seem to not have much volume, and come straight down. That or her shadow doesn't quite line up with the direction she's turned. Regardless, I like this design you're going with. Keep it up!
Well would you look at that, community helping yukkuris! Now that's a good citizen. . .unlike at least 80% of the yukkuri strayhood taht is horrible uninvited freeloader >_> . . .
Right next to Reimu's most visible braid, that part of the hair is not dark enough. It looks like it's on Reimu instead coming from its head.
Dunno why but Marisa looks a little cheeky and the braid also looks like its on her. Maybe you should have drawn some hair above the braid's base/origin/inserttherightwordhere.
Looks good. BTW, I've heard that if you want to improve your drawing skills, every time you finish a sketch/drawing you should put it away and watch it the next day so you can see what you have done in a more objective way.
JusticeItEasy said: Well would you look at that, community helping yukkuris! Now that's a good citizen. . .unlike at least 80% of the yukkuri strayhood taht is horrible uninvited freeloader >_> . . .
Is it really though? I bet its only doing it for the promise of sweets, and not out of any sense of altruism.
They are supposed to be truly kind. I was going to put something along the lines of "Reimu doesn't need sweet-sweets. Reimu just wants to help," or something like that, but I didn't have that much space and I thought it might end up being too much text.
Fragtagonal said: They are supposed to be truly kind. I was going to put something along the lines of "Reimu doesn't need sweet-sweets. Reimu just wants to help," or something like that, but I didn't have that much space and I thought it might end up being too much text.
I did think they were nice, i even thought they were some sort of "karmic mirror" of the Easter Egg Reimu and Kobawiza.