Farathe over 8 years ago Pooled and translated. (First time I've done that, not so bad.)As usual, the slurring was a bitch, both to translate and emulate.If you find any mistakes or have a better idea for dialogue structure, please go ahead. 1 Reply Copy ID
BaronMind over 8 years ago Try to be consistent when writing slurring. If you change one 's' sound to 'sh', make sure you do the rest too. Saying it out loud helps.I tweaked it a little, probably too much. Don't do hurt hurt... 1 Reply Copy ID
exitstrategy over 8 years ago Thanks for the translation. Looks like a nice Happy End with the inevitable battle between the two remaining yus when they finally notice each other. 0 Reply Copy ID
saline over 8 years ago the yukkuri compulsion to vocalise everything they're doing, even when they're being burned alive always tickled my funnybone 0 Reply Copy ID