gerio_japa said: I want more comment on this image easy!
Since you asked for it, here's my honest critique of your work. What do you want us to say? The matter is most of your edits aren't very good. People don't want to come out and say directly they're not very good, so they mostly stay silent or talk about somewhat related topics. There's a few good ones, like the poo poo one http://yukkuri.shii.org/post/show/47926/ or the one where komarisa finds koreimu refreshing with the marisa doll http://yukkuri.shii.org/post/show/47617/ That one made me laugh.
But mostly, they're just confusing. And no, it's not a language issue. The edits just don't make any sense. Take this one http://yukkuri.shii.org/post/show/47490/
Why make this? Yea, the premise is three different anons and their reaction to yukkuris, but what's the point of the picture? You've not generated anything new, you've not created discussion or thought. You've just put three things next to each other and saved it as a jpeg. Anyone who reads those three comics could tell you the same thing. Piko is shocked by Refreshing Play, Between Studies-Anon is enraged by crying, and True Happiness-Anon is pleased at the parents' reaction to him crushing their little one. There's nothing to talk about within the picture except to state that it's an edit comparing those three anons. Anyone could have made this picture, only it's so obvious to them that such a picture would be pointless that they haven't made the picture.
I haven't talked about this picture though, so I guess I'll talk about this picture. Once again, anyone who's a fan of Kiriraitaa is just gonna go "It's an edit between the burning koreimu from True Happiness and Piko from Shell." What else is there to say? There's nothing to discuss as far as the picture goes. It has no context and as a result, it's impossible to discuss. The same problem is true of most of your pictures. They contain no characterizations or situations, and as a result don't generate any emotions or observations. And because of that, there's no real comments.
If you wanna get better, if you want people to say "Hey, it's a new Gerio Japa picture!" excitedly, then here's what you need to do. You need to start drawing. Or writing. Create something of your own, put a little of yourself into it. Not just this empty rehashing and manipulating of other people's stuff. If you feel like you don't have the artistic ability to draw or write, and you can only do edits, fine. Edit, but at least change the text a little, maybe try to tell your own original stories. Because as it stands, your source material is severely limited. There's only so many ways you can rearrange the existing stuff, and the majority of the possible rearrangements are gonna be like that comparision picture. Pointless.
I hope you'll forgive my extremely blunt critique of your stuff. I've been wanting to say something like this to you for a while now, but didn't know if I should post it. But you asked for more comments, so here it is.
No no, you're misunderstanding. It's not "offensive."
In order to be "offensive," a picture must first offend. That is, it must evoke some sort of emotional response.
Your picture doesn't evoke anything apart from the observation that it is an edit. It's not offensive in any way. It's not necessary to DELETE the picture. In fact, it's probably better to keep it up as a benchmark for the work that you do in the future as you improve, so one day everyone can look back and say, "Wow, Gerio Japa has come a long way."
Similar to what we do with Noraaki or Danogoat or Aquarium Guy.