For a talking paste bun, I'm going to put "being beaten until you agree with everything Mr. Human says" including "Kill strays on sight" as "brainwashing.
3. The first step in brainwashing is the operator applies pain or stress against the victim. This may go on for a few minutes or up to a few years. The word pain or stress can be of many types, such as:
Ø Actual physical violence or pain.
Click link. Ctrl+F Copy and paste "PRINCIPLES OF BRAINWASHING". Read.
Brainwashing is defined by many definitions and physical violence is one of them.
Well that was an interesting read, seems the shitty pet training can be called brainwash, it fits this article's description, so I was wrong. Kinda scary how broader that article makes brainwash...
Oh well, better erase that pointless argument I started for the sake of less clutter and as an apologize for being hardheaded.
Though now you taught me how to brainwash people, so be ready when I made you all part of my World Domination Organization, MUAHAHAHAHA!
... I still think heaven is too good for Komarisa though, aside of that, I retract everything I said before.
Sorry JIE for saying you have no compassion. Yeah, in the end I went back to the beginning and I guess I felt a little better in my dark heart seeing the two reunited once more. They don't have to deal with the world anymore. Lucky little fuckers. If these things did exist, I would probably create some sort of massive Yukkurarium specifically for strays that knew of the hardships of the world and were niceheads, or just suffering yu's. But that's a work in progress in my head, I'm actually thinking of turning this idea into a story series, but it needs some work. Wtf am I kidding, it needs a lot of work.
Don't sweat it, sometimes I can be quite merciless while dealing with fictional stuff that I find obnoxious or that angers me, the privilege of not having to worry about consequences I guess...
Sad it finished, I hope the author don't stop bringing series, even if they aren't that long as stated for our amusement and great justice, and thanks you too for the translations zidana
The humans in this story seemed to share the intelligence of the yukkuri. It made it hard to see anything here as believable. Especially the thing about a human being outsmarted by a yukkuri.
Variations: in the sense of musical compositions. It is actually a long (text-based) story describing how a Loving-anon turns into an Abuse-lover. Could be anger-inducing, but I guess at this moment no one here is going to translate the whole story.
Still though, this was one of the best abuse stories i've ever read. It perfectly illustraizes everything in yukkuri world: Cruelity of most humans, absolute retardedness of all yukkuris, cynicism and ungratefullness of most yukkuris.
What are the lessons of this story?
1) don't go looking for trouble 2) don't try to be merciful when you are trying to survive 3) don't backstab people who were kind to you (even though they caused you harm unintenionally)
Still though, this was one of the best abuse stories i've ever read. It perfectly illustraizes everything in yukkuri world: Cruelity of most humans, absolute retardedness of all yukkuris, cynicism and ungratefullness of most yukkuris.
What are the lessons of this story?
1) don't go looking for trouble 2) don't try to be merciful when you are trying to survive 3) don't backstab people who were kind to you (even though they caused you harm unintenionally)
I salute you hy. I salute you.
To be honest, I think you took the worst of this story.
They didn't really go looking for trouble, trouble came looking for them. Unless you speak of the alley part, but that's because they didn't know what happened. You should always be kind to those around you. Even if survival is at hand, you can still make it work. The backstab occurred because the survival instinct was strong in the PC-98 Reimu. Mother Reimu didn't like that.
This story, to me, was not an abyuse story -- it was just a story of how cruel and cold the world can be, and how no matter how hard you try and look, you can only find peace and happiness in death. No matter how much hope you hold on to, in the end, life loves to stick it in and break it off.
What was the point of this comic, scums didn't get punished, families got destroyed, the innocent were stomped and punished
There's no one to stop the scum pets and the Marisa mafia and they will continue to cause suffering and uneasyness to all the yukkuris
Not even for average abyuse this was easy
We won nothing
Only uneasyness and sadness.........
That hy(numbers) comic where it's like 100 pages of reimu and her kids being being abused randomly by the restaurant guy was amazing at the time. the comments probably still tell the story, even we were like "please no more"
That hy(numbers) comic where it's like 100 pages of reimu and her kids being being abused randomly by the restaurant guy was amazing at the time. the comments probably still tell the story, even we were like "please no more"
I still want to murder the scum mafia and the scum pets, i really can't describe my hate against the
God this story it's just Soo damn anti climatic and bad........
As to the quality of the story, that's up to everyone to decide. I seldom participate in the discussions on my own posts, because I believe that once the work is produced, the creator is already dead. In order to maintain one's status as a creator, one must continue to create. The reason why I don't respond to your comments is simply because I don't want to disrupt your discussion.
Finally, thanks to everyone again for patronizing my work. {{Mother and Daughter}} has finally come to the end. Adding it all up, I dug a lot of holes* but filled in few**. Those that are properly finished are even less. But when I look back, most of the finished ones are satisfying, like {{Variations on Yukkuris***}} and this story. I'm not saying that their contents are superior to the others; they're just longer.
The variations# throughout this story have almost surpassed what I, as the author, could imagine. Occasionally I stopped updating the story not only due to exhaustion, but also I wasn't sure how the story should proceed. I tried my best avoiding to be influenced by the guesses that everyone had as to the plot; meanwhile I also took inspiration from them. Many of the comments from all of you were enormously helpful. This is one thing that I can't thank you guys enough for. Thank you again, everyone.
For the next one or two years after this story is complete, I'm probably not going to write another long story, mostly because it takes too much effort. If you added the time it took for me to write both of my long stories, it would be more than a year. It's entirely too much, huh huh.
* Dig a hole: to start a series of story or comics.
** Fill in a hole: to finish the series properly.
*** Variations: in the sense of musical compositions. It is actually a long (text-based) story describing how a Loving-anon turns into an Abuse-lover. Could be anger-inducing, but I guess at this moment no one here is going to translate the whole story.
# "Variation" here is in its common-sense. Afterword