This is already enhanced, the lines are light because these are sketches. I usually ink the finals. Before I commit, I want to get some opinions on the yukkuri design, I've been trying to work on improving it.
Suggestion: try thicker braid. Not puffy, but if it's too thin, the part with the roll looks like straw (IIRC, Suiso's non-puffy Reimu's sometimes came out like that too)