So you guys like reading stories from the perspective of the yukkuris more than from the human angle? I was thinking of compiling all the images into a single large image so you can see side-by-side the changes Marisa goes through. I guess I can add her version alongside the images and decrease the text size so the images will be close.
well, would just be a nice addition to see what the yukkuris do to marisa. are they living like a "the strongest survives" way(i guess it runs that way in your story) or if there are also yukkuris gathering together to live(maybe marisa tried to get into them, was too arrogant and got thrown out again, who knows). just some thoughts ^^
>So you guys like reading stories from the perspective of the yukkuris more than from the human angle?
You've understood it wrong. In my personal opinion there isn't such thing as preffered story perspective. Just some stories are better told from one side, and some are better told from another.
As for this one, I just feel, that it would be totally epic, if it were told from both sides. Unlike other stories, sides would complement each other. Maybe beacause yukkuri and human spend so little time together? Or because they don't show their true feelings to each other?
example of yukkuri banding together post #4928 and following. maybe marisa finds some, bands together with them to take revenge on her owner, raiding his home ^^
>it's too bad yuu113.doc does not get updated anymore :(
(Former) summary anon here. Sorry about that, but I just don't have the time anymore...it was a different story during the summer, but now I'm swamped. If someone else wants to continue it, by all means do so. It's quite time-consuming, though.