There were a few parts of this story that really made me facepalm, like just the convenience of certain Deus Ex Machina parts. Overall, it was a decent story, just wish this guy wasn't another in a long line of artist/writers who always want every story to end with the yukkuri dying in misery.
I mean, look at how it ended. It was clear the artist wanted to wrap this up.
I just feel bad that the three players who went through so much to find peace only found it in death. Even the fight between Marisa and Reimu, I found to be pathetic and Deus Ex Machina convenient. Her owner let her wander freely around the same park where she lived? She didn't recognize her mom at all? Kills her mom? Oh, come on. Oh, and even better, 'randomstraywhostoleyourgoldbadgecanfoolyourowner.' Srsly.
Well to be honest, the bad end was a given. But something that you can't put on Hy is that he didn't put hints on the backstory.
The miss whas the one that offered orange juice to Reimu early, the rotten gold badge cartel explain that in fact they are allowed to walk alone without overseers and that they're a rotten bunch.
Well to be honest, the bad end was a given. But something that you can't put on Hy is that he didn't put hints on the backstory.
The miss whas the one that offered orange juice to Reimu early, the rotten gold badge cartel explain that in fact they are allowed to walk alone without overseers and that they're a rotten bunch.
Oh, I know, and I didn't mean, 'decent,' I meant, 'good,' it was just certain parts that were 'convenient.'
And yes, the bad end is a given, because all of these stories have bad ends. :P