That's right, this is an original. I've been meaning to edit this as well, but Kiriraitaa likes his gradients and loads of those makes everything more complicated...
As an addition to the translation, I think that the correct translation of "Paku'" is "munch" or some other onomatopoeia which involves picking something with the mouth.
1) *Bulge* (eyeballs, in a sickening sloppy, wet, kinda way) pikii (screeching) 2) *convulse*convulse* (twitch is what i normally use, but this is specifically jerky twitching, like when something is in the middle of getting electrocuted. iounno, twitch sounds better, convulse is more accurate, maybe try using a thesaurus for more alternates) yuu... yuu... 3) *sssssss-pop* (like a cork coming out of a shaken bottle) 4) I'm born eajy! (thought bubble) yuuyuu... mwommie... 5) yuu...? *sizzle*sizzle* *twitch* (now this is actual twitching) 6) yuyu~ something... *sizzle* strangely... 7) mushy-mushy... (second one's slurred as her mouth melts) *nom* (it's a soft mouthing, could go with *chew* or something like that)