color: yay! Reimus' hair would be better if darker. The pee-pee looks like mustard. Try using a lighter color or change pee-pee and Marisa's hair color. I think those little blushes (like the one on R2) should be more pinky-ish but that color works great for injuries like the one on Marisa. One more thing: I believe Anon's mouth should be placed more to the left.
The number on the Reimu's ribbon is a bit difficult to find if you are not looking it, mabye making it a little bolder or having it be a different color than the creases.
The panels look great and help the reader put a picture to the dialogue, because there's actually a picture there.
I do enjoy your style greatly, keep up the good work!