CaptainDJSpankawitz said: I looked through for some better fonts, didn't find anything that stood out. I'd switch if i had a good trade off, suggestions?
Don't worry about it too much, it fits the style well. It's more of a subjective opinion than an objective one, so yeah, take it easy~
Anyway, you're doing a great job here, keep it up. One thing, though, same with the whole nutsack wiggling thing, the upper left panel makes it appear Deibu there has 4 braids! Try putting curvy lines within the flapping braids instead of outside the body, I guess?
Nell said: Continuing to love the little face icons-- very nice touch!
Little face icons?
One thing I have to comment about is the pee. More detail, rather than just a triangle, would definitely make that scene look better. It kinda sticks out as being under-detailed compared to the other stuff. Another thing you constantly do is to not draw liquids as transparent. You gotta remember that you can see to the other side of the peepee, cause its just a big white spot on the page. (Where am I in my life that I'm giving advice on how to draw pee)
u called him stupid that why your out side + yukkuris are stupid and get played wit to much give it to much of something and well u end up with a reimu and have to kill it