Oh well, I still would had prefered the "both shit parents die, little ones get a new daddy" happy end than this. I think the Marisa got forgiven too easily when she didn't apologize or anything, all because of "I suddenly changed my mind even If I smacked you and ditched you a few pages ago!".
That was... extremely confusing. I think this would have worked better as an alternate ending rather than the kids imagining it, feels like the artist changed their mind at the last second.
Looking over the series as a whole, I'm going with "the uploader goofed with the ordering of the series in the pool" excuse. The pacing makes more sense, the yukkuri's motivations are less anger inducing, and the story as a whole gains a bittersweet ironic feeling.
Skribulous said: Looking over the series as a whole, I'm going with "the uploader goofed with the ordering of the series in the pool" excuse. The pacing makes more sense, the yukkuri's motivations are less anger inducing, and the story as a whole gains a bittersweet ironic feeling.
(That's what I tell myself, anyway. This is more likely why we don't get a name for the artist responsible for this.)
I dunno if it's less anger inducing, It just makes me think of those uncaring parents that want to act like they are still teens or something and neglet their kids, sometimes to the point of outright abandoning them because "they get in the way of their mojo" or something like that, then the parent comes back with a lame ass smooth line trying to act like nothing happened and take the kids, and the kids being naive believe him/her.
Yeah maybe I'm taking it too seriously, but I truly hate parent's or family like this, reason why I was rooting for "Parent double Kill and kids being adopted by a nice mister or a nice new yu parent."
Not quite but I'm having a hutch that what Skirbulous is saying may be true (though saying that the uploader goofed up the order when the page numbers are right on the picture is a little much)
Skribulous said: Nah, was just kidding you. Like I said, I'm pretty sure there were no mistakes in the uploading, but I'd like to pretend otherwise.
Well regardless of that they're strong evidence that your theory about alt ending made be true which would make the ending less of a cop-up.
Skribulous said: (That's what I tell myself, anyway. This is more likely why we don't get a name for the artist responsible for this.)
The artist name is supposedly chucchuaki (ちゅっちゅあき). I haven't put down the artist yet because of a combination of laziness and questioning if that's correct.
Gothic_Togekiss said: The artist name is supposedly chucchuaki (ちゅっちゅあき). I haven't put down the artist yet because of a combination of laziness and questioning if that's correct.
I was being mean-spirited there though, making fun of the idea that the author might aware of how badly written this piece is that they're not even putting their names on it when posting out of shame. (In actuality, it wasn't that bad of a story... the pacing's a bit off near the last part though, and it's more of lack of english translations rather than actual story deficiencies.)
"Well, did you enjoy the good_end? Oh, you really thought it was over? Well, too bad, the true end continues at post #43623."
(I just realized why this doesn't have a page number...)
Yunn!...oh well, Reimu will go home easy!Yu? The little ones disappeared?Marisa won't forget anything precious anymore ze!My precious treasures...the little ones...Found them ze...but seems like there's no need to be looking for itMarisa forgot something... and she's just coming to pick it up zeDon't get me wrong ze!