Not this is a good entry. Unlike that previous post, the flow is dynamic and consistent, and the humor is maintained throughout while managing to strike a balance with the action going on. The reader can easily tell that this is the work of a storyteller, not a wannabe artist putting in some cool shit just because it looks hilarious. The art may need improvement, but we're not expecting professional work so that gets a pass.
Most importantly, this did not take 3+ months to make.