anko3412: The Child Doesn't Know its Parent's Heart
[Wrathkal's comment: "This Koreimu is like that one drawn by Ayazou." http://yukkuri.shii.org/pool/show/468]
Summary by Wrathkal:
A Marisa is raped by a Deibu, but against the advice of Clan Leader Patchouli, she decides to keep it, hoping to raise it differently. However, Koreimu's initial response when she's born is to call her mother uneasy (because Marisa took her hat off to catch Reimu when she fell), and say she'll make Marisa her slave.
Despite Marisa's efforts, Koreimu proves to be a total shithead, being rude and demanding to everyone, even her own parent. It all comes to a head one day when she stabs Marisa with a branch because Marisa 'wouldn't let her take it easy'. Marisa's last thought is to tell Koreimu to take it easy.
A Myon finds Koreimu munching on her mother's corpse, and the clan gathers to decide what to do with the shithead. Patchouli agrees that the koyukkuri will be punished, but she decrees that it'd be imprisoned for three months. If it improves, then they'll spare it, if not...
And so Koreimu's living hell begins. It loses its hair and ribbon, and is beaten with branches before thrown into a hole it can't escape from. Its only source of nourishment is the clan's excretions. Despite that, Koreimu refuses to repent.
One night, it hears someone calling to it, and looks up to see its dead mother. It immediately curses Marisa and tells her to save it, sneering at Marisa's questions and reminders about what she taught Koreimu. Marisa leaves to return another night.
Night after night, Marisa returns, trying to get the koyukkuri to change, but it remains a steadfast shithead. Eventually, three months end and Koreimu is dragged before the clan, and her 'mother', whom it yells at to save it and bring sweets, then punish the clan yukkuris.
'Marisa' tells Koreimu that this is its final chance, even if it is a hopeless scum, she doesn't want to see Koreimu die. But Koreimu proudly proclaims that it has done nothing wrong.
"I see... that's a pity."
Removing her hat, 'Marisa' is revealed to be Patchouli, and she tells the clan to begin. They toss Koreimu back into the hole and start filling it up with stones and dirt, crushing Koreimu. Patchouli looks sadly at the filled-up hole, because that was Patchouli's grandchild. She finally leaves with the clan.
Beneath all the dirt and rocks, Koreimu's life is steadily fading, but it continues to think, why is this happening to it, why wouldn't its slaves obey it. Its dying thoughts are only filled with hate and despair because the world didn't follow its wishes, nothing else.