""I'll eat every last bit before I leave" I thought. As an adult, I should have acted as a better server (Definitely need a second opinion on this.). I gave into my anger and something bad happened as a result. "Yupiiiii!"" *chew chew* "YUGIIII"
Thanks for the translation, and sorry if I mucked up transferring to the notes. I'm too tired to dig out my kanji dictionary and check, I just proofread the english...
"(I) had thought to tastily(?) eat till not a crumb left/none remained", "I should have put the adults (yu) into(?) sweet(2) saabaa(?), (i) gave (myself) to anger and (i have) done regretful/wasteful(?) things"
My main issue with this is "あまあま" which is slang I haven't heard before, and the use of "サーバー". The former seems to mean something along the lines of "acting too lenient/gentle", but I'm just going off this (http://okwave.jp/qa/q4929328.html). I'm taking "サーバー" to be "Server" as I have no idea what else it could be, but it doesn't make much sense to me.
Ah, you're right. I got caught up with having to work with some kanji I haven't used before and overcomplicated things. Okay, I'd change it to "I'd originally figured I'd just eat the thing, down to the last delicious bite...but I probably should have kept it around until it became a fully grown sweet-sweet server. I let my anger get the best of me and screwed up."
I think that the 生体はあまあまさーばーにするべきだった is an adjective sentence that qualifies the 怒り because of the な particle between they, so the literal translation could be something like "I gave into the anger about this organism that should be a sweet-sweets server and did a regrettable thing."
Other TL ignoring this idea of adjective could be "This organism should be a sweet-sweets server. So I gave into the anger and did a regrettable thing."
My only issue with that translation would be that my dictionary specifically states "adult organism" rather than just "organism", whereas this one has been called only a child in previous panels.
My Japanese morphology (?) definitely isn't as good as it could be.
but I probably should have kept it around until it became a fully grown sweet-sweet server. I let my anger get the best of me and screwed up.YugiiiiI'd originally figured I'd just eat the thing, down to the last delicious bite...chew
chew"Yupiiii!"chew
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