Top: But not everything in the forest can take it easy, like these three yukkuri alice. They have already stared reimu and marisa for long time. But since marisa is such a easy yukkuri, the alice's cannot do what they want.
2nd: Finally, there's a chance...
3rd: Who... who are you?
4th: *hohoho* city-sect alice finally finds reimu...
I think observed would work better here, and is probably what you intended. Otherwise, great job!
But not everything in the forest can take it easy, like these three yukkuri alice. They have already stared reimu and marisa for long time. But since marisa is such a easy yukkuri, the alice's cannot do what they want.*hohoho* city-sect alice finally finds reimu...Who... who are you?Finally, there's a chance...