And in hindsight, the last line of the other translation was moreover:
Still, they said nothing of the koreimu and continued to cross the river.
--- "Just a little bit more..." "Yuu.....yuu........yu??"
The komarisu noticed something. It's feet started to feel cold. Wanting to see what it was, it turned out water was collecting in its hat.
"Water in mister hatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!"
WHY!?!! thought the komarisa. Indeed the Komarisa was not an aquatic Marisa, but its hat still melted rather quickly. As the komarisa's body began to get wet, it began to sink. As she began to take in water and drown, she fell into the water.
It all started with a stupid home invasion and house declaration. Reimu's mate Marisa was the first to die, and Reimu started running with her three children, two Reimus and one Marisa, with the human walking after them in pursuit.
She returns to the site of her previous home, where an Alice-Marisa couple are covering their cardboard box home. Hearing about, and later spotting, the uneasy human, Marisa attempts to protect Reimu by chasing him off, only to get slowly beaten to death in front of its mate and children. Alice and their children follow, but not before realizing that Reimu had already ran off.
Due to the difficulty of carrying three koyukkuris in her mouth, Reimu snatches a hat off a Marisa and carries the children inside. When they get hungry and demand food, she steals food from a Chen, and they poop on Chen's hat afterwards. Both victims are later killed by the human.
Reimu finally returns to her clan, and tells them the story. They initially want to punish the human, but the Elder Patchouli's questioning reveals that it was all Reimu's fault, and they cast her out. But the human arrives and starts crushing every yukkuri there, despite their attempts to protest their innocence. Patchouli dies with one last look of hatred at Reimu, as the human smiles at Reimu while beating the back of Patchouli.
Reimu continues to run, and the human continues to follow, and unrelated yukkuris continue to die. All of the victims stare after Reimu with hate, for being pulled into her mistake. Then one Koreimu (the scum that demanded food first) falls out, but Reimu doesn't notice and leaves her behind. She screams after her parent, but the human catches up...
They reach the river, and Reimu is initially panicking over having no place to go. But Komarisa gets on her hat, which makes Reimu recall when Marisa taught the koyukkuri to do that. She grabs a branch and does the same, but forgets the other Koreimu. Just as she's turning back, she and Komarisa spot the human behind Koreimu, and continue onwards instead, who realizes she had been abandoned.
Komarisa's hat is damaged by Nitori, and she drowns due to her tender body taking in water too easily. The Nitori ignore Reimu since they're only interested in Marisas. Reaching the other shore, Reimu promises that she will have her revenge, and looks up at the night sky mourning her dead family...
She turns around to react in anger to laughter behind her, and spots the human, who had crossed the bridge to get to the other side. He proceeds to beat up on her, but stops when he hears her blame him for killing every-yu else. He pulls out a bag and empties its contents in front of her: bean paste, custard, chocolate... Reimu, thinking he's making up for his mistakes, digs in happily... then she notices her dead children's accessories mixed in, and finally realizes what she has been eating.
When she starts vomiting, the human picks her up and puts her in the bag, where the death stench bothers her a lot. Inside, she suddenly starts hearing the voices of her dead child, Alice, Patchouli, every-yu who died because of her. She reacts with shock, denying blame as they continue to attack her mentally. She eventually dies without realizing her mistake.
Chasing Deibu"Just a little bit more..."
"Yuu.....yuu........yu??"
The komarisu noticed something.
It's feet started to feel cold.
Wanting to see what it was, it turned out water was collecting in its hat.
"Water in mister hatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!"
WHY!?!! thought the komarisa.
Indeed the Komarisa was not an aquatic Marisa, but its hat still melted rather quickly.
As the komarisa's body began to get wet, it began to sink.
As she began to take in water and drown, she fell into the water.