Great idea! The concept is kinda like those justice porn vids. Show obnoxious person. Make people hate them as much as possible, then deliver the "justice". Awesome!
Anon hasn't been in the business for long. When he became famous, he will know his words are true.
No matter what he did, there will be abyusers who said his methods are too boring and not enough. Then he starts accusing them as jealous or lovers who try sabotaging his show :D
This story put emphasis on one of the more ignored aspects of abyuse: the mental side. Anon doesn't just physically torment reimu, he spends the proper time to break down her ego.
Personally, I think the author should have saved the mouth burn for the very end. Silencing reimu just before her last performance is selling her short.
exitstrategy said: Personally, I think the author should have saved the mouth burn for the very end. Silencing reimu just before her last performance is selling her short.
Nah, Reimu is an artist. It's important for artists to be able to express themselves so that others can understand them. By taking away Reimu's ability to express itself in its last torturous moments, he denies its artist soul its chance to express it. Very thought out.