I think there's a problem with a line in 2; "Stupid humans that don't take care of humans must have rotten eyes", since the line includes a reference to "Cute Reimu"
The picture by itself surely looked like the children had rotten attitudes.
...Maybe an unofficial followup to this little story (along with the Lemon Candy followup I mentioned a week or so back) is in order if I can be bothered to draw out any of my ideas. ...I'll just need to think up which Touhou girl to be the the "anon" here since I want to avoid using Akyuu or just any old Anon.